I like the shots where not all is revealed. There is a story but still "open" vs "closed", you still have space to develop the plot. Hiding the face works for me in this style, just the hint of a human form.
What is your story with this photo?
Pro tip: Get close, real close on these shots. Closer than your comfortable, then take a ton of shots. I need to do this every time I am out with the 28mm lens.